I want to post my review of Booklife by Jeff VanderMeer, but apparently my brain is still sorting that one out (or rather is pushing everything else to the back so it can concentrate on turning stacks of square bracketed pleas of desperation into half-decent fight scenes), so instead I will share some links of other people’s thoughts on writing, and how it relates to meeee. Because right now, NaNo being NaNo, it’s hard to see past the end of the novel on my face.
Did I say novel? I meant nose. But mostly I meant novel.
Jo Walton writes on the fantasy technique of madey-uppy words – when it works to add depth of worldbuilding, and when it makes you look like a tool.
This fills me with due apprehension because I am indeed writing book 3 of a trilogy which does exactly this thing. Only hopefully in the depth of worldbuilding way and not the tool way. I have deliberately pulled a messed up hybrid of French, Italian, Latin and English into play, and have insisted in some cases of using particular words where ordinary English ones would do. In all cases, though, it was when the ordinary English version was not just ordinary, but so overused that it came with far too many connotations.
‘Princess’ for instance. It’s one of those words I can’t write with a straight face any more. Not with Disney’s finest staring out at me from my daughter’s schoolbag every day. I also banished ‘night’ and ‘girl’ because it was the only way, I decided, to avoid using them in every single sentence in the book.
Most of the trilogy, incidentally, takes place at night.
Anyway, I will hug my madey-uppy words to myself and brace myself for the displeasure and judging looks of
girliejones. I solemnly swear I have not added any apostrophes in the middle of names (cough except where grammatically accurate).
Meanwhile, Scott Westerfeld talks about “Passages of Disbelief,” a lovely term to describe that moment when the ordinary people of the familiar world are faced with magic, or aliens, or the Other for the first time. [I have lots of this in my book too, as it's basically urban fantasy that happens to also be otherworld fantasy]
Reading his post my first thought was ‘ooh, Buffy did lots of that, especially that lovely Oz reaction to vampires being real’ and Scott promptly linked to an essay he wrote on those moments in Buffy. The essay is awesome, and makes me want to a) buy the book (damn you, SmartPop, are you never satisfied?) and b) watch all the Buffy. Like I have time for that. Though it might help me with those damned fight scenes…